Starcrossed
Yet adjacent
In the sky
She wants to feel the warmth
Of the lion’s yellow mane
Maybe
She’ll come close
In a billion years
Until then
His light
Caresses her softly
And she reflects
That which she can’t touch
But will always feel
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Beautiful poem for eclipse day Amy! For me, it evokes the emotion and wonder of the heavens. Our Sun, our moon. 🌖
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Thanks for the good idea to repost it today, Mary! Yes, that’s a good take on it, I agree. It’s funny because when I wrote it, I reread it and realized there are at least three different concepts going on in that poem. And now enters a fourth. 😊
It was a few months back when Kevin and I and a few others were discussing how a writer composes a piece with their own definition of what it means, then the audience perceives it in their own way, giving it a whole new life. So I really appreciate that this poem means something different to you than what it means to me. And yes, I can totally relate to what you’re saying and I see that interpretation there, as well now. I think it’s just fascinating how creating and then sharing with others opens up so many awesome interpretations of a piece.
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Yes, it’s wonderful. Poetry is like music in that way. So many different interpretations are possible and valid and interconnected. Your poems are really great.
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Thanks, Mary.
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Hello
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Beautiful poem 🌹🌹
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Thank you🩷
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Sweet poem Amy ❤️
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Thanks, Aboli 🩷
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Sensual longing through imagery, very nice.
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Thanks. 😊
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thorn oh paw paw
pull out oh ouch
put in
smile
and thanks
for the woman ur
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Well-written, beautiful and fitted for time and season. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you very much. I appreciate that.
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beautiful, Amy 🤍
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Thanks, Destiny💛
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